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@@ -144,16 +144,16 @@ that young boys\' graves were also accompanied by bows (Fig. 5).
 
 The
 four youngest individuals with a bow are less than 4 years old and the
-one in Figure 5 has a bow that is too large for his age. This
-observation and their age -- less than two years for two of them --
-shows that these bows are not necessarily placed in tombs to express the
-activity of the deceased, but also have a symbolic connotation related
-to male status. 
+one in Figure 5 has a bow that is too large for his age. 
 
 ![Intact grave of a 1.5-year-old child with a bow, a cushion made of vegetable matter, and a pot (Kerma ancien III, Sector 29). As is the rule in Kerma graves, the body was placed on a carefully cut piece of bovine pelt.](../static/images/honegger/Fig5.jpg "Intact grave of a 1.5-year-old child with a bow, a cushion made of vegetable matter, and a pot (Kerma ancien III, Sector 29). As is the rule in Kerma graves, the body was placed on a carefully cut piece of bovine pelt.")
 **~~Figure 5. Intact grave of a 1.5-year-old child with a bow, a cushion made of vegetable matter, and a pot (Kerma ancien III, Sector 29). As is the rule in Kerma graves, the body was placed on a carefully cut piece of bovine pelt.~~**
 
-The richest graves sometimes distinguish themselves in a
+This
+observation and their age -- less than two years for two of them --
+shows that these bows are not necessarily placed in tombs to express the
+activity of the deceased, but also have a symbolic connotation related
+to male status. The richest graves sometimes distinguish themselves in a
 more spectacular manner. One of them had 50 aligned bucrania to the
 south and 38 decorated pots on the surface. It is at the beginning of
 Middle Kerma (*Kerma moyen I*) that the first royal graves appeared,