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 title = "Contradictions cohabitating"
 has_highlights = ["desert.md", "laterra.md", "twocivilizations.md","sunaina01.md"]
-editors = ["clemence.md", "beatriceg.md"]
+editors = ["clemence.md", "beatriceg.md", "kevin.md"]
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-As I read the highlights a fil rouge has risen and developed itself with me.
+As we read the highlights a fil rouge arose and intertwined itself with us.  
 
-From the idea of Gramsci of the world as a huge, terrible and complex system but where each of our action can move changes and brings awareness to us and the others to an idea of unconditional love for the Earth as Beatrice wrote form Habib’s Film.
+We live in a complex reality; as ![Gramsci](author:gramsci.md) says: “there are multiple facets of one reality,”
+and it’s hard to think about the idea of defining, studying, experiencing, and understanding what we are exposed to.  We would like to keep many different points of view focusing on the idea of contradicting and opposing elements in the next highlights to grasp the totality of this complexity.
+ 
+The city, while itself a complex entity, is opposed to the natural world.  However, as Dario noted, quoting Calvino, “each city is shaped by the desert next to it.”  With this in mind, we must better understand the natural world around us in order to understand the human environments that we have created.  However it is not only a question of understanding and interpreting.  As Marx famously wrote, “The philosophers have only interpreted the world, in various ways; the point is to change it.”  And yet, when it comes to the natural world, we must become aware of the way we change it.  As Bookchin writes,
 
-The file rouge moves from abstract thinking to the real role of the nature in shaping our landmarks and society.  as Calvino wrote and Dario highlighted “each city is shaped by the desert next to it.” and as Gramsci reinforces the contraposition, better say the differences and the abyss between cities and countryside that hardly will come today one day.
+“Human beings alone are able to intervene to change the course of the natural world through technology and innovation. The question is whether they will do it rationally, in the service of ever greater freedom, or destructively.”
 
-We live in a complex reality, as ![Gramsci](author:gramsci.md) says: “there are multiple facets of one reality.”,
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-and  it’s hard already to only think about the idea of defining and studying, experiencing and understanding what we are exposed to. For this publication I would like to keep many different points of view focusing also on the idea of contradicting and opposing elements in the next highlights. 
+Thus, to paraphrase Marx, humans have only changed the natural world, in various ways; the point is to love it.  And as the Tunisian shepherd states in the film of Habib Ayeb, it is not enough simply to love the Earth, but to love it unconditionally.